Creating Memorable Characters

What is a well-drawn character and how do you draw one? While these questions are tackled at every writer’s conference, I think bagging the wind would be an easier task than nailing down the one thing that makes a character real in the reader’s mind.


Because characterization requires layers…lots of them. That elusive device or trick that makes a flat character three-dimensional doesn’t exist. It takes many tools to fashion a person the reader will care about. I’d like to share a simple tool I’ve added to my writing craft box, one I picked up from twenty years of helping novice actors excel on the stage.

Only 7% of what we communicate is communicated with words. The other 93% is communicated with 55% body language and 38% vocal intonation. Where do these alarming numbers leave wordsmiths like us? Up a creek…unless we learn to give our characters movement and sound. One quick and easy way to make progress toward accomplishing this feat is with costuming.

Far too often we dress our characters in jeans and a shirt and send them forth in our WIP without further consideration. But taking a moment to select costume pieces that either restrict or increase a character’s fluidity of movement can create mental body language specific for that character. Simply by adding body language, we’ve increased the believability of a character’s dialogue by 55%.

How does costuming work? I’m not sure. But I know that if I take a stay-at-home mom who’s comfortable in her sweats and costume her in a suit and heels, she suddenly moves differently across the stage. Can this happen on the page? Absolutely.

In her stunning debut novel, The Russian Concubine, Kate Furnivall gives an example of costuming’s influence upon a character’s fluidity of movement. When Alfred, an uppity Englishman, makes his stage entrance in the middle of a filthy Chinese market, he is dressed in a cream linen suit. Immediately, the reader sees a man desperate to keep himself pristine. Ever tried to keep a toddler’s sticky hands off of your white blouse? Then you have a mental visual of how Alfred would move to protect his clothes in this uncomfortable environment. And it is in our mental movements of Alfred that he suddenly becomes…more real.

Want to know more about creating characters that leap from the page? Stay tuned.

About lynnegentry

Wife. Mother. Writer. Acting Coach. Director of Dallas International Performing Arts Academy.
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6 Responses to Creating Memorable Characters

  1. Great points, Lynne! I better hop over to my WIP and check out my characters choice of clothing for the next scene.

    Hugs and blessings,

  2. Thanks for the tip, Lynne!

  3. Julie Marx says:

    Helpful. Look forward to each blog, Lynne.
    BTW, can I do the Vulcan mind meld on you?

  4. Very good info, Lynne. You go, girl.

  5. Lynne, I love that you are blogging, and I can’t imagine anyone w/ more finesse being able to pull off your subject matter. Great ideas and such focus. Keep ’em coming!

  6. lynnegentry says:

    I peeked at your blog through a posting by Kaye Behrens; great stuff. I see you are still writing and chasing the dream. And, doing it well. Lynne, you have special talent that might be the basis for a good non-fiction book; one you may have in progress. Your playwright and directing skills and understanding could be codified in a writer’s tool book. For example, words that describe body language, facial changes, etc when a character experiences an emotion. Novice writers like me have characters slam a door or throw something rather than slowly rotate their body, lower their chin, and fold their arms. We don’t know enough about directing actors through a scene to write the action.

    I know your seminars must be successful because I have seen your skill. However, I also know of your art, craft, and word selection as a writer. The two, merged together, might be lucrative or, at a minimum, note-worthy in spreading the word about Lynne Gentry. You could sell them at your seminars. Or, do you now?

    Take care of yourself. I miss seeing your smile.

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